Entry #2 to class assignment

My Free Write Story

A very lonely girl with no one to turn to. That is what Crystal had become. She had just lost her beloved great grandma and now the only thing to live for was her boyfriend and her barrel horse. But Crystal was confused, her boyfriend lived four hours away and there was no way she could ask him to come stay with her. For he had just been there when her great grandma passes to support her through the hardships of the process of recovering.
So Crystal spent a long and lonely summer hoping to try to get over what no longer was. But as the days went on it just got harder. The more responsibity she had to take care of with cleaning and closing her great grandma’s house. The house that she loved, the one she spent most of her childhood afternoons and summers in, it’s all gone now. Every last memory has been washed away.
As the summer continued to drag on, things got worse. Crystal’s beloved dog Duke passed away the day before her great grandma’s birthday. This was really hard on Crystal because her dad has asked her the day before Duke passed to save him. See Crystal worked in a vet clinic and had access to any treatment that her dog could possible need. So Crystal took Duke to work the day before, took x-rays and found out that the condition he had called megaesophas had caused him to have severe pneomia again. Now this was nothing anyone worried about because Duke has had this condition all his life and has been battling pneomia and there was no reason why he could not pull through this one too. Little did we all know until the next morning that the pneomia had reached his pulmonary artery and it was under so much pressure that it burst. This instilly killed Duke leaving him in Crystal’s mudroom in a pool of blood the next morning. Crystal found Duke like that when she woke up at six in the morning to give him a cough tablet to help with his coughing.
This is as far as I got with the story in my creative writing notebook.